Benny Bunter

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Just been reading pearls that were and that's got simple children's poetry style rhymes, although the content is adult and very weird. So maybe it's not totally surprising he'd do something like that.

Siskin in flocks, arab takeaway larder
won't despise what can't be told:
Tie fast to fix up a ragged flag, further
for brokered news, news for old
 

luka

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Just been reading pearls that were and that's got simple children's poetry style rhymes, although the content is adult and very weird. So maybe it's not totally surprising he'd do something like that.

Siskin in flocks, arab takeaway larder
won't despise what can't be told:
Tie fast to fix up a ragged flag, further
for brokered news, news for old
He's got the essay about twinkle twinkle little star too. Have you read it?
 

luka

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this is a poem by prynne on prunes and their laxative effect.
i worked out some of what he is doing by using the etymological dictionary
pru/run/rune/prune

Pruning is a horticultural and silvicultural practice involving the selective removal of certain parts of a plant, such as branches, buds, or roots. The practice entails targeted removal of diseased, damaged, dead, non-productive, structurally unsound, or otherwise unwanted tissue from crop and landscape plants.

and suggesting a common root with prudent, propro- word-forming element meaning "forward, forth, toward the front" (as in proclaim, proceed); "beforehand, in advance" (prohibit, provide); "taking care of" (procure); "in place of, on behalf of" (proconsul, pronoun); from Latin pro (adv., prep.) "on behalf of, in place of, before, for, in exchange for, just as," which also was used as a first element in compounds and had a collateral form por-.

rune (n.) Old English run, rune "secret, mystery, dark mysterious statement


the runs-rune
 
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luka

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run (v.) the modern verb is a merger of two related Old English words, in both of which the first letters sometimes switched places. The first is intransitive rinnan, irnan "to run, flow, run together" (past tense ran, past participle runnen), cognate with Middle Dutch runnen, Old Saxon, Old High German, Gothic rinnan, German rinnen "to flow, run." The second is Old English transitive weak verb ærnan, earnan "ride, run to, reach, gain by running" (probably a metathesis of *rennan), from Proto-Germanic *rannjanan, causative of the root *ren- "to run." This is cognate with Old Saxon renian, Old High German rennen, German rennen, Gothic rannjan. Both are from PIE *ri-ne-a-, nasalized form of root *rei- "to run, flow"

prism a direct link with prune as in cut (Euclid), literally "something sawed (as a block of wood), sawdust," from prizein, priein "to saw" (related to prion "a saw")


lease (v.) late 15c., "to take a lease," from Anglo-French lesser (13c.), Old French laissier "to let, let go, let out, leave" "to let, allow, permit; bequeath, leave," from Latin laxare "loosen, open, make wide," from laxus "loose" (from PIE root *sleg- "be slack, be languid"). Medial -x- in Latin tends to become -ss- or -s- in French (compare cuisse from coxa). The Latin verb also is the source of Spanish laxar; Italian lasciare "leave," lassare "loosen." Compare release (v.). Meaning "to grant the temporary possession of at a fixed rate" is from 1560s. Related: Leased; leasing. The form has been influenced by the noun, and the modern sense of "to take a lease" might be a new 19c. formation. Lessor, lessee in contract language preserve the Anglo-French vowel.
 

luka

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"in a descending direction, from a higher to a lower place, degree, or condition," late Old English shortened form of Old English ofdune "downwards," originally of dune "off from (the) hill," from dune "from the hill," dative of dun "hill" (see down (n.2)). The "hill" word is general in Germanic, but this sense development is peculiar to English. As a preposition, "in a descending direction upon or along," from late 14c.
"a hill of moderate elevation and more or less rounded outline," Old English dun "height, hill, moor," from Proto-Germanic *dunaz- (source also of Middle Dutch dunen "sandy hill," Dutch duin), "probably a pre-insular loan-word from Celtic" [Cambridge Dictionary of English Place-Names], in other words, borrowed at a very early period, before the Anglo-Saxon migration, perhaps from PIE root *dheue- "to close, finish, come full circle."

which leads you to the key word, which isn't actually there in the poem

dung (n.)
late Old English dung "manure, decayed matter used to fertilize soil," from Proto-Germanic *dungō (source also of Old Frisian and Old Saxon dung "manure;" Old High German tunga "manuring," tung "underground room covered with manure;" German Dung; Old Norse dyngja"heap of manure, women's apartment;" Swedish dynga"dung, muck;" Danish dynge "heap, mass, pile"), perhaps from a PIE *dhengh- "covering"
the other absent word which provides a key is plum. plum position. prime.
"forward, forth, toward the front" (as in proclaim, proceed); "beforehand, in advance" (prohibit, provide);
 

luka

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Orchard. Each poem is about a different fruit pretty much eg greengage. It's the most likeable of all the post 2017 stuff imo
 

luka

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@Corpsey hes got an Oasis tribute in his new one look. Morning wood, way too hard in the early morning


(47)

That’s the story morning glory
play the card that guards the door,
way too hard in early warning
every day but more and more.
 

Benny Bunter

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I've decided all the references to sherbet in his poems = nose-candy
I got the idea today that the poem White & Smart is about this. No sherbet reference but:

"The white hawk he calls to, rising to powder wished for and spilled/On his hand"

"Go to the mirror boy and see the frost there, wings numb and shaking"

and some other vague stuff that might be about a drug experience...or might not.
 
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