It's very nice indeed, lots of lovely alliteration/assonance.
Benny Bunter Well-known member Mar 2, 2023 #181 It's very nice indeed, lots of lovely alliteration/assonance.
Benny Bunter Well-known member Mar 2, 2023 #182 First three lines set up the rest of it nicely. About war and death and that but written in a contradictory soft and swishy sort of style
First three lines set up the rest of it nicely. About war and death and that but written in a contradictory soft and swishy sort of style