That last bit is exactly what I tried to say.yeah it's kind of Hemingway
I like it. it contrasts with his exact descriptions of things, or flashbacks, or whatever.
always the ellipsis - elide the worldbuilding, elide the action, elide the emotions
sometimes it gets - idk if precious is the word, up itself maybe, everyone does kind of turn into a cool taciturn badass
it's hard to say tho cos people have been ripping him in inferior projects for 40 years, mistaking the cool facade for the substance
Just like Mom used to bake, on a Sunday.Hot, steaming RAM.
You never know, maybe he'll trip while carrying his boxes of stuff and fall into, oh I dunno, a pit full of strongly radioactive burning dogshit or something.I want him to die, not resign in short.