just relistening to this (the start of your ending) and it sounds great. i love the clap on that beat, very crisp, seems to come in at just the right time as well.
i might do a versus CD for the car with this, need a suitable feminine voice as a counterpoint. i've previously used steeleye span (wiley), kate bush (gza liquid swords), joni mitchell (various lads eg t2, jai paul, novelist).
maybe marianne faithfull broken english will do it.
yeah sounds great actually - the little bits of dialogue in between are quite heavy. sound like a very real band to me.